Glutton for Punishment

So, in reference to my previous Emma sketch, my watercolor teacher says, "Bring it to class. I'll give you a 'crit.'" Well, okay. Am I going to need a special cream for that?

During today's no-naps, I tried to sketch the same picture again.

Looking at it, I think it improved in some ways. But, I think it might have equally degraded in others.